¤ deus ¤

© 2009. AB Ella.

This is not the main story of Deus. Short stories that are posted here are just side-stories or stories that are inspired by other literary works. PLEASE READ AND CRITIQUE MY POSTS . Please forgive the incompetence, shallowness, amateurish work. I'm a lowly, frustrated writer. My grammar's not good and I have a lot of typos. However, I just can't stop myself from thinking and writing stories. Maybe it's in my blood. ANY VIOLENT REACTIONS, COMMENTS AND SUGGESTIONS WILL BE VERY MUCH APPRECIATED.

I am a fan of Dan Brown, Sydney Sheldon, Steve Berry and of course, JK Rowling, Neil Gaiman and Stephenie Meyer, and even Darren Shan. I read mangas and watch a lot of anime and dramas (is addicted to Asian Dramas). I like mysteries, controversies and fantasies. I'm not that much of a fan of romantic stories but I keep writing them. I write really cheesy and corny lines and titles (must be from too much dramas).

This story was originally inspired by "Curious Play" or "Fushigi Yuugi" by Yuu Watase. That was way back in 2000. As I see more anime and read more books, I wanted it to be bigger than anything else that I have seen.

Thus Deus was born.

Vomica Deus was its first title. It's Latin for "cursed god." However it's too centered on one character only and I didn't want that. If I'm lucky, I'll get a chance to write the real story of Deus.

Thank you for reading... and I hope you don't barf from boredom, cheesyness and corny--ness? Thanks again.

¤ Prologue ¤
He sighed heavily as he watched them go on about their business.

“Like a bunch of chickens with their heads cut off,” he chuckled.

He shifted in his seat and sighed again, this time louder as if wanting someone to hear that he was bored with what he was seeing. He was bored, but there was nobody to see this boredom.

“And yet, I’ve seen it all before,” he said to himself.

He thought that when he gave the Orsen free will, they would make things exciting to watch. For the first few thousand years, it surely had been exciting. Nowadays, balance was tipping dangerously to one side and outcomes have been too redundant. But no one was noticing it, not even his sons and daughters.

He walked over to his study and looked at his work and found what had gone wrong. This design was applicable before, but now, as evolution becomes eminent, it’s no longer appropriate.

It’s too simple for the complicated universe. The management seemed to be too weak. Humans have gained far too much control. And that gave him an idea.

The Orsen have had their fun, now it was somebody else's turn.

His children have been too lenient on these beings. Some have been too idle for far too long. What was the point in making them so powerful if they won’t be able to show it?

It was time to make a few alterations in his design. The world needed renovation; this is after all, a new era.

He looked at the clock.

“Perfect timing,” he mused.

About...

Deus is a modern retelling of a story about gods. Kind of like a modern mythology. This is my version of what mythological gods are.

Setting: The Universe. Various realms and worlds.

Time: Indefinite.

There will always be a higher power that created everything. These gods are his sons and daughters, born to rule, to watch, to influence and guide and sometimes they exist merely because they need to exist.

There are 3 types of gods: Deities, Elementals and Diitras.

Elementals are gods that merely exist because they need to. They are life itself. Without their existence, there would be no need for anything else. They make up everything in the Universe. They are the pillars, foundation of all things. Created out of nothing. Supposedly, they are neutrals because nature is neither good nor evil. They are only necessary.

Deities are those that govern over the Orsen.

The Orsen are those living beings that reside the Universe. This includes humans, demon, extraterrestrials and the lot. Everything that lives and thinks for themselves are considered Orsen.

Diitras are known as anti-gods. Everything that is unnatural and negative in the Universe are under the Diitras powers.

The plot is simple: The Deities are good, the Diitras are bad, The Elementals are neutrals and the Orsen are their playthings.

A new generation of Gods are born every few thousand years.

The plot changed when the new gods arrived...

 

 

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